Nonogi Park
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Emu

So, uhh... Then, what about...

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Emu

What if Nakayama's really from outer space and is here to investigate the Earth?!

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Nene

I think that's going a little too far...

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Rui

It's becoming harder and harder to come up with good ideas.

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Emu

Hmm...

When's Bakuno gonna get here?

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Tsukasa

He should be arriving soon.

I just received word that he's right by the station... Ah, excellent!

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Tsukasa

Bakuno!

Over here!!

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Reki

Oh, Tenma...

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Reki

Huh? All of Wonderlands×Showtime is here...?

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Emu

Hi, Bakuno!

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Rui

We really appreciate your joining us on such short notice.

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Reki

No, um... It's not a problem...!

I was able to come because this park just happened to be where I usually run.

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Reki

So, uhh... You said on the phone that you needed my help figuring out how to play your character...

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Tsukasa

Yes! Let me jump right in.

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Tsukasa

I need your help coming up with a story where Nakayama the editor is the main character!

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Reki

Huh?

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Nene

Wait, Tsukasa.

He's not gonna understand if you start with that. You gotta tell him everything.

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Tsukasa

Yes, you're right.

The thing is...

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Reki

You want to turn a supporting character into a protagonist...?

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Tsukasa

Precisely!

I feel that I must in order to really become my character!

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Tsukasa

I tried coming up with various stories about Nakayama on my own based on what you told me the other day, but none of them fit quite right...

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Reki

Then, would you mind showing me what you've come up with?

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Tsukasa

Yes, here!

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Reki

Huh...?

All these sheets of binder paper...?

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Reki

How many stories did you come up with?

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Tsukasa

About fifty!

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Tsukasa

Although, I didn't come up with all of them on my own. Rui and the others helped quite a bit. Unfortunately, I'm not imaginative enough to come up with stories for other people.

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Tsukasa

Together, we came up with many...

But none of them felt right.

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Tsukasa

Which is why we'd like to hear from you since you're a pro when it comes to this, Bakuno!

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Reki

N-No, I'm not a pro...

You're giving me too much credit...!

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Rui

In any case, this story is the one we thought was the best.

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Emu

Um... This one is...

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Emu

The one where Nakayama thinks he knows a lot about books, but Hino knows even more and works with a famous author, so Nakayama sees him as a rival!

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Tsukasa

Yes, with this in mind, the way I read the three lines changed greatly.

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Tsukasa

“Morning.” “That novelist giving you trouble again?”

“No choice, I suppose.”

Like that!

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Reki

Oh...

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Reki

That's incredible...!

You sound completely different from how you did during practice!

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Reki

If Nakayama sees Hino as his rival, then does that mean he has some sort of inferiority complex? Maybe they joined at the same time, and everyone always compares the two...

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Reki

Oh, what if something happened between them at work? Like Hino outperforming him...?

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Tsukasa

Oh... That's actually our plot twist for the second act of Nakayama's story!

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Tsukasa

A novelist he was hoping to work with ends up going to Hino instead.

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Tsukasa

He feels his losses piling up...!

But then, someone asks whether or not he'd like to become the editor for a girls' manga magazine!

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Tsukasa

Because of how much he's struggling at his current workplace, he decides to take the leap and change jobs! Lo and behold, he thrives as an editor for girls' manga!

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Reki

Yes, I see...!

I really like that...!

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Reki

However, because you've come up with such a good ending, I'd like to hear more about the conflict he undergoes before he finds success. For example...

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Reki

You could try changing the root of his inferiority complex. What if he was writing his own novel, but was forced to become an editor instead? Maybe a love triangle was also involved...?

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Reki

Raising his age drastically could also make things more interesting. Seeing a younger coworker succeed could wound an older man's pride.

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Tsukasa

Yes, of course...!

Even the smallest changes would greatly impact how he behaves towards Hino...!

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Emu

That's so cool!

You're coming up with all these ideas so fast!!

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Rui

Wow...

Your powers of imagination are certainly impressive.

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Reki

Still, this is only one possibility out of many... Some more ideas may help give you a better understanding of who he is...

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Tsukasa

Ah... In that case...!

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Tsukasa

What if Nakayama used to be Hino's mentor? And he was the very first junior Hino was asked to look after, and Hino initially doted on him.

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Reki

Yes, I like it!

And they could...

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Emu

Hehe!

They're having so much fun♪

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Rui

Yes...

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Rui

I sense some good results coming.

A few hours later
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Tsukasa

“Hino.”

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Tsukasa

“How was it?

Did you enjoy the girls' manga they put me in charge of editing?”

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Reki

“I never expected you to ask me for my opinion.”

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Tsukasa

“I want to know.

And give it to me straight.”

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Reki

“To be honest, I've never read many things like this before...”

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Reki

“But girls' manga is far more interesting than I initially realized.”

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Tsukasa

“...!”

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Rui

And scene!

That was excellent.

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Rui

I felt that you really had become Nakayama just now, Tsukasa. And your conversation with Hino felt so natural.

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Tsukasa

I-It did?!

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Emu

Yup yup!

You were really amazing, Tsukasa!

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Nene

I actually felt relieved when I saw that Nakayama's hard work had finally paid off.

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Tsukasa

I... I did it!!

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Tsukasa

Thank you so much, Bakuno!

We created a believable story about Nakayama! All that's left is for me is to master this role by remembering what I just did with every fiber of my being!

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Reki

*Nod*

You're welcome.

*Sigh*

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Tsukasa

Hm?

Is something the matter, Bakuno?

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Reki

No, um...

It's just...

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Reki

It's been so long since I last had so much fun.

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Tsukasa

If you're happy, Bakuno, then I'm happy!!

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Reki

Haha. I can't help but feel a little embarrassed when you put it so plainly.

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Emu

Hehe!

He's smiling from ear to ear!

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Rui

Yes, he is.

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Reki

Tenma.

All of you from Wonderlands×Showtime...

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Reki

Let's keep doing our best until we do this for real!

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Tsukasa, Nene, Emu & Rui

Yeah!