Ichika's Room
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Ichika

Phew... I've made some good progress today in terms of learning more about songwriting.

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Ichika

But I can only do this on days when I'm not assigned much homework.

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Anyway, this seems like a good place to take a break. I think I'll put on a Miku song...

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Oh... I haven't had a chance to listen to Yoisaki's other songs yet. Maybe I should put one of those on instead.

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Let's see...

Oh wow. Marionette has so many views.

I guess I can start with that.

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(It has such a unique sound and some dark overtones to it, but the intro's so catchy.)

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(The lyrics don't pull any punches either...)

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(It's like this song puts everything out in the open without hesitation...)

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Wow...

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One more time.

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(The phrasing, or the metaphors being used, I guess...? I can tell exactly what this song's trying to say...)

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Ichika

And Asahina's the one who wrote these lyrics...

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Ichika

(She's so kind and thoughtful, so I never would've imagined her being able to write such dark lyrics...)

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(Or is it just a testament to her creativity?)

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Either way, she's an incredible person...

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Alright, I need to keep doing everything I can to be able to clearly express how I feel through what I write.

The next day
Miyamasuzaka
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Ichika

Oh, Asahina, good morning...!

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Mafuyu

Good morning, Hoshino.

You're here quite early. Morning practice? No, that can't be it...

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Ichika

Oh, I woke up earlier than usual, so I'm going to head to my class to work on some lyrics.

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Mafuyu

You've been hard at work, I see.

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Ichika

Actually, I haven't been making much progress...

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Ichika

Oh, but I did get to listen to one of your group's songs yesterday.

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Mafuyu

You did? Thank you.

Would you mind telling me your thoughts?

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Ichika

Of course! Um, I listened to Marionette, the one about the puppet.

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Ichika

I was completely blown away by the phrasing and metaphors used in the lyrics...!

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I have a feeling that the lyrics were really able to bring the song to life because a puppet was at the center of it all.

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Ichika

Oh, I'm sorry...

I didn't mean to ramble on like that.

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Mafuyu

No, I appreciate it. I'm the one who asked for your thoughts, and I'm glad you liked it so much.

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Ichika

Oh, also...

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Ichika

Would it be alright if I asked you a little about how you came up with those lyrics?

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Mafuyu

Sure, what would you like to know?

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Ichika

About the song's interludes and bridge after each chorus when the listener seems to be asked, “Right?” or “Don't you get it?”...

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Ichika

They're not actually a part of the lyrics, are they? How did you arrive on doing that?

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Mafuyu

Oh, that...?

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Mafuyu

Sorry to disappoint you, but there's really nothing to those parts...

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Ichika

Huh? I-Is that true?

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Mafuyu

Yes. I was told that it would sound a little creepier if I were to add in something like what you heard.

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Mafuyu

Ultimately, its purpose became to add some spice to the voids left after each chorus sequence...

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Mafuyu

They hold no real meaning in terms of the lyrics.

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Ichika

O-Okay, I see...

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Ichika

I was so sure that there was some deeper meaning to those parts. I feel so embarrassed about overthinking things like that.

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Mafuyu

No, don't be. I should be apologizing for misdirecting you in such a manner.

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Mafuyu

But I really appreciate how you took what I wrote so seriously.

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Mafuyu

And everybody who listens to that song is perfectly entitled to their own interpretations.

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Ichika

True...

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But you seem to use a lot of metaphors in your lyrics. Is there a reason behind that?

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Mafuyu

Hmm... It's usually because I can't find the right words to describe something.

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Mafuyu

Or when I'm being deliberately vague.

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Ichika

Wait, deliberately vague...?

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Mafuyu

Yes. For example...

“Anger” comes to mind.

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Mafuyu

I may be mad at someone, Person A, for some reason, but those who aren't familiar with Person A won't understand how I feel even if I try to write lyrics about them.

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Ichika

Oh, I see...

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Mafuyu

And it'd be rude to call them out by name, no?

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Mafuyu

That's when I'll use words like “bully” or “braggart” instead.

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Mafuyu

Then it becomes clear who's playing which role in this situation.

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Ichika

Yes, that makes so much sense...!

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Mafuyu

Oh, I think it's also important to use different euphemisms or examples depending on how a particular song goes.

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Mafuyu

“Braggart”, for example, may be more suited to a song with a brighter or upbeat tone to it.

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Mafuyu

Conversely, referring to people as chess pieces, such as a queen or king, could work if you wish to treat them like an opponent for a dark song with a sharper tone.

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Ichika

Yes, I see...!

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Mafuyu

Sorry, I didn't mean to sound so snobbish. I know I'm not a professional or anything.

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Ichika

No, everything you just said makes so much sense! Thank you very much!

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Ichika

I'll be sure to keep your advice in mind when writing lyrics from now on!

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Mafuyu

Hehe. I'm glad I could help.

Good luck, Hoshino.

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Ichika

Thank you!