Lunch break
Kamiyama High School - Class 2-A
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An

Yes, it's finally lunchtime!

I'm starved!

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An

Oh, Kusanagi, wanna have lunch toge—

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Nene

...

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An

(Oh, she's really focused on that notebook on her desk... Is it the screenplay for our film...?)

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An

(Maybe something's giving her trouble...)

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An

Kusanagi! Is something wrong? You look concerned.

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Nene

Oh, Shiraishi...

So, um... I was just working on the screenplay for our film...

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Nene

But I'm having trouble hammering out all the little details behind the hero's personality.

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An

His personality...?

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An

(I don't know much about screenwriting, but it still doesn't feel right having her do all the work...)

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An

Then, wanna try thinking about that together?

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Nene

Huh?

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An

I don't know much about this stuff, but I'm sure we'll be able to come up with some good ideas if we put our heads together!

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Nene

Oh...

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Nene

I agree. Thanks, Shiraishi. I was pretty stuck, so if you don't mind brainstorming with me...

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An

Okay! The hero's a cook, right?

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Nene

Yeah.

The plot involves him fighting against a bunch of baddies to protect a girl who's trying to deliver food to her sick mom.

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An

Yeah, okay...

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An

People who fight to protect others usually have a strong sense of justice, right?

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Nene

Yeah, there's that...

But he'd still be missing something...

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Nene

He's a cook, so I wanna make him feel more like a real one, you know?

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Nene

Which is where I got stuck.

What does that even mean?

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An

More like a real cook, huh...?

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An

If it were up to me, I'd want him to sound mature and have a strong sense of will...!

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Nene

Really?

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An

Yeah. Someone who's always there for you. The type of person you can really count on!

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An

Oh, but that's not the only thing! He takes his craft really seriously and doesn't compromise on it...

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An

Like one of those baristas who inspect each bean before turning them into coffee! He cares about the little details, and that's what makes his food so delicious.

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Nene

I see. He's someone you can count on...

He takes cooking more seriously than anyone, and doesn't compromise on it...

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An

Yup! So, for example...

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An

“I'm a cook.

Each grain of salt I use must be perfect.”

Something like that?

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Nene

Hehe. Yeah, okay.

But I'd like to make him sound a little more impassioned if possible.

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An

More impassioned?

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Nene

Yeah, uhh...

Because everyone in this class is really talkative and outgoing...

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Nene

I feel that a character who says what he's thinking in a straightforward manner would make it easier for our lead.

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An

Oh, good point...!

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An

Alright, more emotion...

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An

“My purpose in life is to make the best food I can for the people who need it!”

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An

“I'll have no choice but to toss you lot into my cauldron along with those ingredients if you refuse to yield!” How's that...?

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Nene

A cauldron...? He's starting to sound more like a witch than a cook.

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An

Haha. True.

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Nene

Still...

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An

Kusanagi...?

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Nene

Having him say what he's really feeling straight out like that might make him sound cooler...

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Nene

Actually, in that case...

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An

(Sounds like a good idea just popped into her head...)

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An

(I'm glad what I said helped her out a little.)

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An & Nene

Oh...

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An

What?! Lunch is over already?!

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Nene

I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to take up so much of your time...

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An

No, that's totally okay!

I was the one who asked first.

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An

Still, what to do about lunch...

Maybe I can just eat while using a textbook as a blind like the boys do.

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Nene

A-Are you sure you want to...?

What if something gets stuck in your throat?

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An

Oh...

Good point...

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An

Wait a second...

Why don't we just eat after class is over?

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Nene

Huh?

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An

We won't have much time, but I wanna have lunch with you! What do you say?

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Nene

Y-Yeah, okay...

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An

Awesome! That's a promise, okay?!