Toya
Shiraishi, I've finished checking the English you used in the rap section you asked me to look at the other day.
An
O-Okay, how was it...?
Toya
I saw no problems with it, including the part you fixed earlier.
An
Really?! Thank goodness!
I only had to do one round of fixes! Isn't that awesome?!
Toya
Yes, it is. Only a few corrections were necessary since you didn't make any spelling or idiomatic mistakes this time around.
Toya
So, Shiraishi, you did well.
An
Didn't I?! I pored through my textbook and dictionary in order to write the coolest lyrics I could.
An
Hehe. We'll need to make sure Akito and Kohane also pull their weight!
Toya
(If only she felt as passionate about studying for tests...)